MY EDITED DRAFT
Alien Apocalypse
What would happen if an alien apocalypse came to earth? You think it won’t happen? Well, it will happen. Wait who am I, well I’m Jason and I was one of the survivors from the apocalypse. Still don’t believe it, well, you will see I am not joking when I finish telling this story.
It all started one night in the year 2038 when a famous doctor Dr.Grocer named after Willson Grocer, president of the U.S in the year 2022, who wanted to make the U.S. bigger (stupid idea) and , to make food less junky and also to make better quality flying cars and to... sorry I went off topic. So I was saying, Dr.Grocer was trying a new experiment, and Laura Deming had already found the longer life cure but what Dr.Grocer wanted was to revive someone. He tried and tried but one time he accidentally revived a dead body of an alien. He did not notice until the alien went inside his house, he woke up from a nightmare the alien caused him, just to find the real alien waiting there to kill kim.
People all around the world knew, no one believed it, well almost nobody did. I did not believe it until it called other aliens and they invaded the world. How? They slowly came. Every day more and more aliens came and one day they were all around the world. Some of us survived but most died, some countries were completely deserted because of the aliens. We fought and fought and the aliens kept coming. Then many presidents agreed on sending some volunteers to go the planet. They asked who wanted to go. I decided I would stay that time but next time I would go. I needed preparation. I researched on the aliens. They were called Gredsingletians they came from Gredsinglet and the fastest and better ship to go to the planet was a Thergolsimbolt type Z and there was a special radar to know where they are, it was called F5GSX.
The next day I researched on costs for the things I would need. The ship cost $1,249,315. It was really cheap for such a ship, I stole the money from the bank, I came in with a super cool gun that fries people. I stole the money and bought the ship. I had good reasons, I was going to save the world so, well it was not so bad. Fortunately my house was really big and I put the ship in my garage (I had no car because I crashed it killing aliens with it.) Then I went to buy the radar. It only cost me $15,000. Now I was ready to go to the planet. I bought extra stuff like a sword and a gun and some other stuff that in total those were $20,000 more but I wanted to be ready for whatever was waiting for me in that scary planet.
The next day the ship they had sent finally got to Gredsinglet and the people barely had time to come out of the ship when they were killed by one of those beasts. They were bigger there than in earth for some reason I still have not figured out. They were really strong, I have never been touched by any of them but I bet they would kill me in one touch. They hit one of the people and he exploded! They tried to run away but they were smashed to blood pancakes. That was scary but I really needed to go.
One week passed and we had no permission to go outside our house unless someone from the army would come to pick us up. There were so many aliens outside that none of us were safe. Then one day they announced that people were needed for a second expedition. I was a volunteer with one other person. His name was, Felipe. He was twenty-one years old and he had the same equipment I had (Except the ship.) So we got in my ship and at first I did not want him to use my brand new ship but it turned out he was really nice and that we could get along really well. We were in my ship for like four or five hours and we arrived on the planet. It was fast compared to the other expedition that took like a day and a half to arrive. When we landed I tried to speak to him but he would barely speak, he would just nod and when he spoke he sounded like if he was sick and with a booming sound.
We were inside the cave already when he said in his cold echoing voice that we should separate. I said that we should separate once we see the are no monsters near. He said it was a good idea so we walked and we reached a point where we were certain that we were safe and so we separated. I kept walking until I turned around to see that my friend was following me. I asked him what happened and he said he accidentally crossed my path. He was looking weird so I asked what was happening to him. He said that he was feeling dizzy but I did not believe him. So he put his hands on his neck and it cracked. It was so weird that I even asked him what was going on then he just let go and his body transformed into an alien, into a giant Gredsinglatian! That is why he had been acting so weird, since it was his home he could not be like a human because it must be really hard. He started to chase me. We ran into a bridge when he jumped to catch me and I dodged him and he just fell into the abyss.
I saw he had dropped like a card that before falling that said something I could not understand so I got my traductor and it said, room 63475, 8th floor, path 5. I went up an elevator I found and went to the eighth floor and searched for the room I got in with the card and went to sleep.
The next day I woke up just to find a plate of breakfast in front of me. I went to see what the plate contained and it only had a bunch of weird things I have no idea what they are. I scanned the food and it said that they were Gristolis’ brains, Veistolcit’s pancreas but and the most disgusting one was the Frimdolin’s shit. So that day I ate nothing. I was once again looking for something to stop the apocalypse but when I came out of the room everything was on fire and bombs were falling down everywhere, but was that the human army fighting?
Well let me tell you something I forgot to say, the presidents said that no army would be sent and that only normal people would be sent. But then a helmet fell down, I had never seen a helmet like that before, well when I was younger there was a game called Halo Wars and the people had those helmets exactly the same. But it could not be, I was trying to figure what was going on when a bomb blacked me out.
When I woke up the fighting was still going on. I then saw this group of soldiers in the ground, I took of the helmet of one of them and what I saw was unbelievable... It was a woman from Earth!!!!!!!! She was hurt and said that the others were hurt too, they were all human and I asked why were their helmets the same as the ones in Halo and she said that it was because those were the most aerodynamic and most resistant suits they could build. She said that they came from Canada and that many other countries had joined the fight because our precious little planet was being attacked by so many Gredsinglatians that they had to kill all of the important monsters because that was like a way to say, do not try to fight against us. I helped them get up and took them to my ship I gave them some food and water then we grabbed weapons and went to the battle.
I had my sword and a gun I stole from the room I slept and the other people had many guns already but I know that only myself can’t do it. We ran back but things were getting worse many other soldiers were wounded and more monsters were coming. I asked the people I helped their names and they were, Clara, Brock, Tom and Steven. So we five ran to find a place where the king or something like that was hidden but when we were running Tom was squashed by a monster and Steven tripped with Tom’s body and fell into a pit. We kept running and the aliens were chasing us until we were back to the room I had found before and we grabbed some suits for the battle, we now were camouflaged but when we came out of the room the people tried to kill us, we put our visor up and told them it was okay and that there were just to camouflage.
We finally found the leader’s base, at first Clara shot him in the chest but he didn’t budge, his arm swinged and almost hit Brock but he jumped on his arm and clanged, the monster tried to shake him off but he grabbed on until he had to let go. I then attacked with my sword and chopped of one hand, his blood was purple, it was a bad idea he just became even more crazy and he got really mad. Then I grabbed his leg and got up to his head but he threw me to the ground, the impact made my vision got blurry. But Clara shot him in the eye. I had enough time to stand up. My head throbbed but I had to keep going. Then I slashed hard into his neck, I heard something crack, his bones, I put more force in the sword and it comes out of his body. I killed him, I saved the world by chopping off his head. Finally our planet was on peace... Well just for now.
