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Change the subject, longer, more detail

We had to choose a genre for our new writing piece. To do that we read a story with zombies,  the point of it was that it was an original tale that would have been sweet and calm but the author took the story and added zombies to it.

We had to answer some questions.

What do you think the original story was?

I think it was a story that was about a couple that wanted their daughters to get married but they put zombies in it.

How do you think the story will change after the mash-up?

I think that because they added zombies to the story it will change because the guy that the mom wanted the girl to marry becomes a zombie and the parents too.

Do you think the two genres crashed at any point?

I think the whole thing got changed there was no crash it went smooth.

MY QUESTION

Why zombies?

I think that it makes the story more adventurous and exiting and also zombies add a nice detail.

This are the guidelines I will be using for my writing project!!!

Unpredictable

Get a story you don’t really like and make it cool so YOU like it

Point of view of main character

800-1200 words